How to write a poem?

Rather writing poetry to express bluntly what you have experienced, write poems to create feelings to the reader.

Focus on these points while writing a poetry.

1. Know Your Goal
2. Avoid Clichés
3. Avoid Sentimentality
4. Use Images
5. Use Metaphor and Simile
6. Use Concrete Words Instead of Abstract Words

1. Communicate Theme
2. Subvert the Ordinary
3. Rhyme with Extreme Caution
4. Revise, Revise, Revise

And finally read yourself as a Reader and if you can’t explain it yourself, expel the poem and write again.

Happy Writing!!

The Night’s whisper

the Moon and stars stare the skin,
Zephyr of moana abrades the sweating,
Along the forehead to gullet,
We swallow each other’s tongue,
Night’s whisper reverberates as –
the Sun rises above the Ocean’s head.

Love : quote

The ultimate foolishness of human being to believe that someone cares more than yourself.

Life: Quote

Life is built by the bricks of failure.

A girl – An odourless flower

An odourless flower she is,
Smells upon the way she is handled,
An aroma as we treat her good,
Stinks when our words stink her heart.

What makes you to read a post fully?

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and reblog this post to get more opinions..

The love beyond the sky

Our love spreads beyond,
the sky and the galaxies,
Catch me in mind’s speed.

Once more

She pleads the sun to stop rising in East,
And she pierces her fingers in my thighs,
To stay cuddled till the dusk in West,
Sun raised not in the sky,
But made me aroused high,
I hold the honeypot,
till she unleashes beads of honey,
We then play it around the bush,
Uttering the hushes of big ‘O’.

V day- The reminder of Love

The reminder of our love,
A day is not enough to express,
The universal truth of souls,
United in karma and in heaven,
Our beloved persona,
Will long for everyday to express,
The moments and memoir of kisses,
We will make another event of love,
While our flushes stroke against,
We will forget the moments,
To make a moment to remember.

How did you propose your love?

Dear friends, we all have struck with love once in lifetime if not that stone hearted.
Here I am talking about the romantic love. You can share in comments, Did you really said ‘ I Love you’ in face? or Did you went home and ringed his phone and whispered in those words?

Or did you write it down on a paper and placed under his table in office and left on vacation without any communication? Sounds interesting right? share it , will be interested your impressive love proposals…

All I can see in you

All I can see in your eyes,
the love in one and lust in other,
As you advance the fingers,
Up and down, all o’er me,
As I slip in bed,
Your hands hold me up,
And you turning me on,
I still looking in eyes,
All I can see is searching,
The love in me, the love in me.

Seasons

Seasons are reminders of our love,
We started as spring bees,
Our loved shed like an autumn,
Fights are heating like summer,
Hibernating our love as winter.

Serendipity

Serendipity of love has no time,
Doesn’t wait for nod of none,
It enters with no time,
Kindles mind and soul,
Makes sleepless nights and dreams,
Ends with fights and tears.

Ocean

Ocean of memories piled up,
Like a mountain of sorrows,
Every breakup sheds tears.

We are living afar

We met through bits and bytes,
Sent the words across the air,
We liked each other’s desire,
Started loving though not met,
We shared the likes alike,
Stayed for hours at nights,
We talked o’er the air,
Starving for hours of talk,
We ended up fighting everyday,
Space enlarged to tear,
We are living afar, because.

Beautiful Ugly

Her lips and cheeks,
Invade the heart and beat,
I thrive to her feet,
She feels shame on me,
Her beauty looks ugly,
When I try to enter her heart.

Untie the belt

The rain water showers the leaves,
My lips rave the lips,
I hold you tight to my breathe,
You struggle to escape the grip,
We struggle below on the bed,
Your smooching air unties the knot,
I try to hold your waist till,
You ohw the orgasm at high.

Best gift for breakup

Tears are not the answer,
Living up to let them cry,
Will be best gift of breakup,
And worst gift for those,
Treat the love as affair.

Ctrl Alt Delete

I entered slowly,
As a virus into your heart,
You locked me like a computer

It’s just us

The scent of your hair,
Drags me from very far,
I caress it like winter breeze,
You snuggle into my arms,
I hug you like a newborn,
You sneeze the heat onto my chest,
I will the warmth of our skins,
Until drop fro my hand,
To the bed,
I feel like flying over you,
Tell me you want me now.

Love is a medicine

Medicine of the soul and heart,

While we fall in abyss,

To suffer more in life.

Beneath the bruise

She is hiding the pain,
Beneath the bruise in heart,
Not longing for his love,
But the memories he left,
Abandoned as an orphan,
And left her in middle of jungle,
Her smiles are fake in real.

His Raving Eyes – a duet

This is my first duet with ritikapeace an amazing poet and a writer.
Thanks ritikapeace for your time.

Her:
The gasps in his eyes
Were blinking in deep.
Sighs.
Whirls in the brain,
Storming the carmines,
Sighs.

Me:
Your beauty of wine,
Drowning deep me in thoughts,
Like a soaked honey date,
Sweetening my tongue to red.

Her:
My eyes checking you
Hope you don’t recognise.
Oh! do.
The reflectors near porch
Don’t show my side eyes.
Oh! do.

Me:
I glide my eyes through you,
Letting it flow like a breeze,
Sigh. Oh , thee lord Brahma,
You created while dreaming beauty.

Her:
Breakthrough oh glass this strangeness
This diaphragm feeling controlled breaths
I’m getting high.
Come on now oh placidity
Ruin me up in your eyes
I’m getting now high.

Eve’s night

Everyday evening becomes Eve’s night,
We shed our sheaths under the bed,
We direct the game of love,
We play it right with no guidance,
There is no rules,
No commands to rule us,
We make the pearl drops to flow,
Free below thighs,
We suck the honey out of tongue,
Until the dawn of Adam’s night.

Like this post if you ready for a duet?

Are you ready for a duet? Just comment below …

“A day to Moon” is the title that we will write a duet.

6 stanzas maximum. 3 +3 would be duet poem.

She was a pie

Tasted from top to bottom,
Licking like a honey on hand,

Her hands moved along the backbone,
I slipped between those legs,

Found a flowery pink petals,
Gushing the honey out,
It was writing a pleasure poem,
On her thighs wetting the panty,

It was a pleasure night,
Where we fall on each other’s hand,
Dreaming of next round of pleasure.

Winter

Shirtless shivering night,
While the sun goes far away,
Temperature cease to kill the earth.

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There is no true love

Dudes, You might be wondering and getting angry over me.
Yes, that’s true there is no true love on this earth.

Mother’s love is true? or Girl Friend’s love is true?

What is true love?. A love without any expectation, a love without any demand,a love without any selfishness might be a true love.
But we have every love with some expectation, at least with an expectation of love in return.

This started with Adam and Eve amd still continues. If there is a miss in any of these expectations,demands or anything, then that relationship cease to break up.

Learned today

Live with the one whom you love or live with the one who loves you, else meet the fate of life.

Clouds

Nature tried to clothe,
the naked blue sky,
But it condensed to rain.

Gentle rubbing

Come and cover me,
Naked,put on your body,
As a sheath of genitals.

Love is unavoidable

It happens every time when our lust has no place to settle.

Deep in me

I gasped hard to breathe,
Crawled under velvet cloth,
You inserted so deep,
As I breathe out moaning high,
Sweating you poured on me,
Reminds me how your sperms,
Swim so fast in me,
I am floating in pleasure.

Never before

Make love never before,
Not to unlove you ever,
Fill me droplets of manhood.

Pearly drops between thighs

Drawing me wildly,
Her hands pierced a current,
She dropped her strings,
With the nails piercing,
Along the back bone as strings,
Our music was played whole night,
Till the dawn of day,
Thrust of force I engulfed,
And given along the bore,
Like a Newton’s law of action,
She squirted the pearls of,
Transparent drops along the shaft,
As we fall in hands,
Another beautiful day flourished.

Quote

Be like a phoneix, love to die and resurrected to love again the sun.

Nights are short

The closeness of our bodies,

Carries a scent of wine,

Energizing nerves with ,

scintillating thoughts and dreams,

Our hands are searching for the,

Hidden secret under the garments,

While touching lips and hips,

You Pierce a sword in the heart,

My feminine feels warmth of pleasure,

Being carried away with dreams,

Take me higher to ecstasy,

Drop me manliness between my thighs.

Peaceful world

I dreamed a world of silence,

where humanoid exists ever,

War of silence wins over Earth,

The world rests in peace.

Welcome me

Pleased to be connected to the blogging world. I hope you guys will welcome with warm hands for the new beginning of my writing.

The poems that have been written under the drawer of my desk will be posted on the blog and I think I will get support from the community around the world.

I wish and will be happy to explore more blogs.