This is my first duet with ritikapeace an amazing poet and a writer.
Thanks ritikapeace for your time.
Her:
The gasps in his eyes
Were blinking in deep.
Sighs.
Whirls in the brain,
Storming the carmines,
Sighs.
Me:
Your beauty of wine,
Drowning deep me in thoughts,
Like a soaked honey date,
Sweetening my tongue to red.
Her:
My eyes checking you
Hope you don’t recognise.
Oh! do.
The reflectors near porch
Don’t show my side eyes.
Oh! do.
Me:
I glide my eyes through you,
Letting it flow like a breeze,
Sigh. Oh , thee lord Brahma,
You created while dreaming beauty.
Her:
Breakthrough oh glass this strangeness
This diaphragm feeling controlled breaths
I’m getting high.
Come on now oh placidity
Ruin me up in your eyes
I’m getting now high.
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This is truly adorable!
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thanks a lot for the comment
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hope i get your part of duet too 🙂
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I am not good at duets,apparently
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This is my first time..I think justified
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You did a great job!
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Thanks.. That’s the way to start no
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