This is a first duet written in collaboration with Subbashini Meenakshi Sundaram
In search of peace
In search of freshness
In search of purity
Me: We walk to the moon,
Like a phoenix to the Sun,
Until we burn to ashes,
In search of wisdom
In search of true souls
As we spoiled our gifted earth
Me: We are in happy flight,
We are sure of plight,
We should walk there right.
Moon was not bright
It want us to smash our mask and be right
It blessed β you can be as you likeβ
Me: Not easy as you think friend,
We are landing darkness of life,
Let the Sun enlighten with us Moon.
In search of peace
In search of freshness
In search of purity
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We walk to the moon,
Like a phoenix to the Sun,
Until we burn to ashes,
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Superb, I just tried only to respect your words. Ignore it if you don’t likeππ
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No Go on, 2 more stanza , we will close this first duet, it’s like two friends walking to moon…
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In search of wisdom
In search of true souls
As we spoiled our gifted earth
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We are in happy flight,
We are sure of plight,
We should walk there right.
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Is it one more stanza to go
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Yes.
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Moon was not bright
It want us to smash our mask and be right
It blessed ‘ you can be as you like’
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Not easy as you think friend,
We are landing darkness of life,
Let the Sun enlighten with us Moon.
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I replied to this 20 minutes before itself, I don’t know why it didn’t get published
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I’m doing now
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done now..u can reblog or re write in ur blog
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Ok I will reblog after you published.
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I did already
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Oh sorry, it didn’t came in my Reader. I will check later. Even comment like option not working for me, so I am unable to like your comments
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oh ok…the first post in my blog is the duet…now i willl be writing next duet π
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Love your name π Intriguing
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thanks a lot
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Your welcome π
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Nice….great words and rhymes…lovely meaning.
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thanks lot
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